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through my eyes
i can barely see
you sitting there
in my favorite tree
enjoying the branches
as we dream away
the troubles of our day

wait
hold on
lets travel through this haze
that blinds us all these days
that is to say
if we ever even saw
to begin with
anyway
so they say
when they say

but lets not stay

linger not
off we go
we must leave
this wonderland
this beauty
all behind and open your eyes
and wake up next to another
but sadly not
next to each other
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a truly tragic romance, something ive experienced a few times, stupid boyfriends.

but yea i didnt like this one when i first wrote it, but when read aloud, i realized its quality.

hopes yous peoples likes its
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awww TT_TT so sad...but well writen

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not another comment by sami! D:
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the power to make mistake and move forward!
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thanks sami

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Pulse beating under, yeah
Meat petals bloom in a bone garden
Ain't no god, no ghost gonna save you now

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